Wednesday, December 21, 2005

A letter to God

One day when I was sad,
Thought everything in life
Was, is and will be bad.

Thought I couldn’t tolerate it,
I couldn’t bear with it,
Thought, I was done with it.

But then would I give up so easily?
Nay! I said to myself,
Not so easily.

Then what should I do?
Where should I go?
Whom should I tell it to?

I decided, and made up my mind,
I will write a letter
To the Almighty who is bound to be kind.

Started writing the usual stuff,
Hello! How are you! What’s going on up there?
Then thought whom am I going to bluff?

He knows everything already,
Don’t think His memory’s so poor,
Which needs a reminding about a little girl,
Who wants her life to go steady and sure.

But still I wrote,
With a neat handwriting,
And with beautiful quotes.
Only complaining,
That He forgot to take my care.
And day on and day off,
I kept on writing.

Page by page, line by line,
I started realizing,
My life was just fine.

Before I realized,
My letter became a book,
And writing down the last pages,
I decided to have a look.

Reading and rereading,
My worries and problems,
Seemed to me as nothing.

All the troubles mountain high,
Now looked small and insignificant,
And I could easily pass them by.

Now I knew,
That my letter had been read,
He had heard me,
And sweet dreams now lay ahead.
i know i know it seems repetative but had no choice... nuthin else to write n my blog now seemed stagnant to me... so a poem again... just to bring about a change....
n ya Christmas is here!!!!! (almost..)
so Merry Christmas to all!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S. :- this was written by me when i was in class 10th all innocent n sweet
i was just getting tortured by me geography teacher when i felt like writing to God and request him to take her away.... well she did'nt go away but infact came right up to table!!!
so this is d story behind this letter... brings bak memories... mayb next time i'll write summore abt old times...
till den.. i stop d torture..

7 comments:

Medhavi said...

Hmm....innocent n all...u're talking abt moitreyee rt? :D lolzz!
no but i hv to agree...geography was bigtime torture..n u wrote a poem under pressure- gud hai!
p.s- i hope yr teacher liked poetry... ;)

Moitreyee said...

u bet she did!!!
made me stand outside her classroom for a month....
but ya also showed dat poem to my english teacher who was impressed n sent me off to other teachers.....
well d story goes on n on......
chalo gud 2 c u left a comment odrwise i was abt 2 leave a comment on my own under sum name....
u c poets hv EGO's....
thx medhavi....

Moitreyee said...

well vindeee.....
first of all nice name!!!(for me)
n yeahh i shud be grateful 2 geoggo(meanin geo) for my creative SPARK!!
so ladies... lets raise a toast in d name of dat 1 subject wich made us poets!!

Medhavi said...

MAnnn!!! now we hv been reduced to a state that we owe "thank u's" to Geo Classes!!!! This shd've been the "Crazier Corner"!!!
wat next?? i think we shd Say tahnk u to English Classes as well...(wat say u guys? ) tho journo hons can owe her success to well...Radhika?/ hehe! lolzz!

Medhavi said...

u jus let us know "when" mickey mouse...OR..we cd jus mak her attend one of her own classes..she's sure to experience hell!
(n sorry moitreyee,,fr making yr space a convo point fr mickey n me-2 ppl who jus dnt get tired of Talkkinnng)

Medhavi said...

lolllzzzz....u wont beliv it...but i started laffing out louudd- jus imagining u laffin that way!!! :D
eheheheheehehehe
eehhehehehehehe
eeeeeeeehehehehehehe!!! LOLLLLZZZZZ
Keep Laffinnnn! (n pls guys, UPDATE yr blogs..i'v linked yr static blogs to my Prestigious Crazy cOrner!)

Moitreyee said...

OK!!
gud to read u guys!!
n hey medhavi trust me v wnt remain static... jst let dese xams pass.. am sure both of us wud write sumthin new.....
but rite nw i feel like postin d comments on my blog... its worth it.. wid d headin... a normal coll day..(for us!!)
wotsay???

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